Beyond Eternal

When Will You

I feel like I’ve been such a fool
‘Cause I have fallin’ in love with you.
Although It seemed like no matter what I do,
Nothing ever seemed to please you.
But, what can I do?

Chorus
When will you see?
When will you know?
When will you learn that I love you so?
When will you glance?
When will you smile?
When will you waste your time for me?

I’m crying inside of me
‘Cause you never even glance my way.
I don’t care what I do,
I’ll always keep on trying to reach you.
But what will I do?

* Repeat Chorus

[unfinished]

—

Yes, Khei. This was the first song we ever wrote together and the only song we didn’t submit to the competition because we never got to finish it. It’s been 7 years since we wrote it. We even both forgot the lyrics as time passed by. Those stanzas that my brain failed to remember before just came to me swiftly while I was on a jeepney. Of course, I kept on singing it until I get home. I love the melody so much. Maybe we should try finishing it someday?

8 responses to “When Will You”

  1. khei Avatar
    khei

    awwww,, you remembered,, so sweet,, yeah it was the first song,, and never got around to finishing it,, hmm,, someday matatapos din ntin un,, 🙂
    BTW,, kita ko si kuya ZING.. remember?

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  2. Euri Avatar
    Euri

    Yeah, he was my biggest crush in HS! :lmao: Too bad, he became a policeman as I expected. I hope he wont get fat through the years. X-P

    Naalala ko tuloy yung graduation rehearsal. When he was about to do his speech, todo kanchaw samin. Hindi na tuloy siya nakapagsalita. So cute. ^_^

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  3. Nura Avatar
    Nura

    Ah, very nice lyrics ^_^ It would be cool to hear the melody too though 🙂 I came up with this stupid melody and I’m sure it’s nothing like that, I hope. I want to get it out of my head now X-P

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  4. Euri Avatar
    Euri

    There were always things like song competition in our school. And we enter the songs we write there every year. It had always been our group who do them together. But when we reached our senior year, our group divded into two just for the fun of competing each other for our graduation song. The winning piece was theirs and became our graduation song. It’s called “Someday“. and ours as called “Last Memories” that won 3rd place (because we’re cheated).

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  5. Nadiyah Avatar
    Nadiyah

    Wow wonderful lyrics! 😮 And it’s been 7 years?! Aw, too bad you didn’t submit it. 🙁

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  6. Euri Avatar
    Euri

    Yeah, because we never got to finish the song.

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  7. Nile Avatar
    Nile

    The lyrics are wonderful. I remember a few friends of mine use to try to make up our own songs with music but we never did anything with them. Hopefully you will finish the song. 🙂

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  8. Hiro Avatar
    Hiro

    So pretty. ;___;
    Yesh. When WILL they realize? >_> God damned those idiots!

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