It was a sunny morning when she decided to go to a mall to buy something. She met a few friends along the way, chatted with them for a bit and went on. Staring at the brightly shining sun, she slowly pushed the clear glass door of the mall and a greeting and a breeze from the air-condition welcomed her as she enters. She quickly glanced to the right when she heard a voice calling out her name from the crowd and saw a friend. She smiled, approached, and chatted with the friend long enough to get another man in the picture. She love him. Full-heartedly as she never want to give him away for anything. She saw him from afar, smiled at him as he approaches. Though the bitterness of reality hit her, she saw him turning away another direction as if they didn’t saw each other. She was crushed. Not an inch she moved for she was traumatized to see him act that way. There was too much pain in her heart that seems to drain all her strength. And her tears, they began to stream down from her eyes as if it will never stop. When she couldn’t bare it anymore, her feet starts to move by itself causing her to run with no definite place to go to. She did not mind the people she had and might bumped into. The only thing in her mind was to run and run. When she reached the glass door where she came in, she pushed it with all her might and still ran outside to the streets. The minute she reached and crossed the road, a speeding car bumped into her causing her, her life. People started to circle around as they pity the girl lying on the floor with blood spilled on her dress, and a few coming out from her lips. It was just a few months after she turned 20. She was so young, so full of life, hopes and dreams. A girl who died young to know the world. A girl who died drenched in her own tears.
Drenched in Tears
11 responses to “Drenched in Tears”
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Oh my god… that’s so sad. This is what love do to people, it’s so much of a price to pay especially if you’re not getting anything in return. Girls are so stupid =/ but what am I to say I am a girl too and we all know that… guys these days -_-
Got a little obsessed with yelling, sorry bout that! haha Euri, are you feeling okeez lately? All your posts seem to be depressing!! hugs feel better!
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“She smiled, approach, and chatted with the friend long enough to get another man in the picture. She love him.” This part was a little odd. However, not so bad. Death a little simplified/over quickly. Not that I’m asking for a full gore fest.
And those were Claire’s opinions. Not that you asked..
I’m off to read the post at http://sweetdiary.cjb.net I hope I shall feel educated. If not – you lied!
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omi.. is that.. from like, a personal experience? ;( eurrrrriii don’t DIEEEEE. x[x[x[x[x[ HUGS
dont dont dont dont! i noticed the resembelance after you said she was only twenty.. 🙁 HUGSHUGSHUGS -
This part was a little odd.
Lol! It’s because the “friend” is also a man.
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Life sucks that way.
T_T
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Thinks a minute o.o;; I KNOW! TEH MAN COMES OUT AND SAYS HE LOVES HER ALL ALONG AND THEN IT TURNS OUT SHE NOT DEAD YET, BUT IN CRITICAL CONDITION, GOES TO HOPSITAL AND GETS BETTER AND THEN EVERYTHING IS WONDERFUL!!! ^______^
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i agree with u saira,, it’s just what euri experiencing. HEY EURI DON’T DIE ON US.. PLEASE.. I know you can do that things but “DON’T DO IT” ok??
We know that ur sad but don’t take all the pain in. ok? so cheer up a little. ok?
you take care now nd don’t do any stupid things like in you story.. ok?
every one here care and love u ok?
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Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot,
who calls you back when you hang up on him,
who will stay awake just to watch you sleep.
Wait for the boy who kisses your forhead,
who wants to show you off to the world
when you are in your sweats,
who holds your hand in front of his friends,
who thinks you’re just as pretty without makeup on.
Wait for the one who is constantly reminding you
of how much he cares about you
and how lucky he is to have you.
Wait for the one who turns to his friends and
says, “…that’s her. -
You guys worry too much.. I’m fine. 😉
Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot,
who calls you back when you hang up on him,
who will stay awake just to watch you sleep.
Wait for the boy who kisses your forhead,
who wants to show you off to the world
when you are in your sweats,
who holds your hand in front of his friends,
who thinks you?re just as pretty without makeup on.
Wait for the one who is constantly reminding you
of how much he cares about you
and how lucky he is to have you.
Wait for the one who turns to his friends and
says, ??that?s her.An idealist.
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aw. how sad TT___TT
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