There you were lying so comfortably
In the couch beside the window.
With a fix gaze up on the ceiling,
As if thinking of something deep,
As if dreaming of something grand,
Staring into nothing at all.

You lighted your favorite cigarette
With that same lighter you usually carry around.
As always, you used your left hand to smoke.
And you gently closed your eyes as you breathe in.
When you exhale the smoke and slowly opened your eyes,
It was as if you’re letting go of everything.

You started strumming that worn out guitar
That was lying in your lap for hours.
You tapped it gently with your long fingers,
And you seemed to enjoy every bit of its vibrations.
Faintly, you started to hum an unknown song.
As if you never wanted anyone to hear it.

The room’s ambiance started to change.
From the window, there was a beautiful scene of a sunset.
The proud sun smiled at you and waved goodbye.
And it left a trail of bright orange that glittered like tiny jewels in the sky.
A warm light kindly hit your face,
As your shadow from the floor started to grow in pace.

I love it when you just lay there on the couch,
With a guitar on your lap,
Smoking your favorite cigarette,
And staring at nothing at all.
I love it when I hear that faint humming,
And the you beside that sunset was stunning.

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  1. Skip2MyLou,
    Damn rich guy. Always with a bottle of beer at your side. =P

    Cool. I really love poetry. But usually, I do mind in a narrative form. XD

    I don’t smoke nor play guitar, so I haven’t tried. But then, the mere scene of it is just so freaking hot to forget. XD

  2. <3 That’s sooo pretty~ .<; I forgot the title~ but it’s something about this girl got ran over by a car and then she woke up in an old mansion that she can never leave… possess by some spirit that lives there and mistaken her identity as her~ There’s this hot bishie ghost in the story~ anyways… XD i’ll stop babbling~ XD

  3. bah… it got cut off in the middle~ XD

    Insert –) I agree with you with the cigarette and guitar part~ it’s hot… and for some reason, It reminds me of that Japanese movie I watched last year~

  4. Kiatsu,
    That’s Kagen no Tsuki. <3 I love that manga. It’s one of my favorites. Since you were talking about the movie, Hyde there is so howwtt!! <33

    Whoever told you it was you? Stop dreaming Selo. Wake up!

  5. Selo,
    Oh! That evening! Now that I think of it, I remember that night so clearly… When I saw you with another man on top of you. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

    But the subject is not me.

  6. No, i was with you the whole time :P(and no one else!), that probably was someone else ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

  7. Come on Selo, it’s only us (you, me, and Kiatsu) here commenting and reading this. So you could openly admit it here without having to use me as a decoy.

    You know, as your friend, we’re pretty concerned too. If it’s us, I think we would understand you (not to mention that both Kiatsu and I loves shonen-ai and yaoi too). So you don’t have to hide that fact that you’ve been hiding from most people. Keeping it inside like that is not good. We wont tell anybody, anyway. ๐Ÿ˜›

  8. But im not hiding anything :o. I like girls, zzz gays :p.

    i love you euri~ <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3. Lets have babies soon ๐Ÿ˜€

  9. .>; Selo, just admit it… it’s pretty obvious already and no point hiding it by hitting on euri-chan~ you were already rejected a bunch of times~ lol XD and well, you already admitted in private that you slept with a guy… why not just openly shout it to the whole world~

  10. because its not true :P. Remember that talk when you got al fired up kiatsu? about gays, ha ๐Ÿ˜›

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